The animation at the beginning was really cool, guys. I love it. Your narration was good and you were very clear in the communication of your message. Excellent job.
I like the animation but it is really dark. Can you adjust the brightness/ contrast? Great script and facts, voiceover could be clearer after 1 minute.
I liked the idea the animation, one thing I would change would be the sound of steves voiceover. Other than that I really liked the background music and there was a good amount of facts.
Fun music and drawings, voiceovers are fun and the script is informative and engaging. Maybe the voiceovers could be a little clearer but I think that may have just been the mic’s fault idk.
I thought this was soooo great!! I also agree with maybe tweaking Steves voice over so that it matches with Akilah’s. Otherwise i loved it very mucho 🙂
The animation could be a little less washed out, but it is very well done and portrays your extensive effort in making this film. Some graphs would be nice.
Very well done, my only suggestion would be to increase the volume when Steve does his voiceover, it’s kind of hard to hear what he’s saying sometimes.
The music is super fun. Lots of good information. Love how you added details about the current population trend perhaps rising. Any place in there for an image of the data with a graph? Is there any other adjustment you could make to the lighting in the stop motion. It is so great, but some of it gets lost.
I feel like the stop monition could be improved. Maybe Imovie could make it a little more stable. Also some parts are cuts off and that makes it hard to read.
The animation at the beginning was really cool, guys. I love it. Your narration was good and you were very clear in the communication of your message. Excellent job.
I like the animation but it is really dark. Can you adjust the brightness/ contrast? Great script and facts, voiceover could be clearer after 1 minute.
You guys did a great job of explaining the importance of mole crabs, and the stop motion was great!
I liked the idea the animation, one thing I would change would be the sound of steves voiceover. Other than that I really liked the background music and there was a good amount of facts.
I really enjoyed the stop motion and the music, but I also want to see what the animation could look like with better lighting.
The script was really good and the stop motion added some fun to it which I loved!
Fun music and drawings, voiceovers are fun and the script is informative and engaging. Maybe the voiceovers could be a little clearer but I think that may have just been the mic’s fault idk.
I thought this was soooo great!! I also agree with maybe tweaking Steves voice over so that it matches with Akilah’s. Otherwise i loved it very mucho 🙂
I really like the music and the transitions.
The animation could be a little less washed out, but it is very well done and portrays your extensive effort in making this film. Some graphs would be nice.
Very well done, my only suggestion would be to increase the volume when Steve does his voiceover, it’s kind of hard to hear what he’s saying sometimes.
the animation/drawings were cool. I agree with Yadira the voiceover is kinda hard to hear. Cool video!
The stop motion was really cool! Well done!
The music is super fun. Lots of good information. Love how you added details about the current population trend perhaps rising. Any place in there for an image of the data with a graph? Is there any other adjustment you could make to the lighting in the stop motion. It is so great, but some of it gets lost.
I feel like the stop monition could be improved. Maybe Imovie could make it a little more stable. Also some parts are cuts off and that makes it hard to read.